My First Writing For IELTS

The Question:

In order to solve traffic problems, government should tax private car owners heavily and use the money to improve public transportation.

What are the advantages and disadvantages of such a solution?

Give reason for your examples and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge. You should write at least 250 words

The Answer:

Nowadays, the increasing number of private cars is the main cause of  traffic problem in a lot of cities. To overcome it, government is supposed to decrease the possibility of having private car by doubling the amout of tax paid by every citizen buying a car and to use the money for improving the quality and quantity of public transportation.

By applying this method, people have to pay more money including for the tax and those  who want to acquire a private car will re-think before deciding to buy it. Consequently, it will push them directly to use public transportation. The effect of people willingness in using buses, trains or trems brought by the government will provide a win-win solution to solve traffic jam in cities’ streets or avenues. People get used to using cheap fast comfortable vehicles bringing them to their destination and authorities can show the ability in serving people. To describe the best implementation of such an amazing policy, Singapore is the best example.  Most people know that there are no traffic problems there.

Nevertheless, the policy of increasing the car tax will be very awful for motor industries producing private vehicles. Less people buy cars means less profit gotten for companies. The decreasing of earning should be overcame by firing employees. At the end, hundred thousands or even millions people will don’t have occupation to live their life.  Of course, this is very horrible to the country. For the example is India, millions people there tend to do some criminals because  they  are jobless

However, it is government obligation to empower people. Encouraging public transportation so that people don’t have to face daily traffic jams and taking care about their occupation as well.

Total words: 293

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